franciscanheart Posted October 19, 2004 Posted October 19, 2004 (edited) okay seriously im working tonight. college entrance essay. this. and whatever else. Edited October 19, 2004 by hugheyforlife
franciscanheart Posted October 20, 2004 Posted October 20, 2004 taking a break and staying out of the homecoming thread....
franciscanheart Posted October 21, 2004 Posted October 21, 2004 ive finished with my reply, however weak, and have asked someone i trust very much to look over it.... i will post when i get a reply and make any necessary changes or additions
Guest Aluigi Posted October 24, 2004 Posted October 24, 2004 I tore it apart haha... strengthen it, it's weak to just say Jesus wouldn't push people away because there are reasons He would just let Him go. you need to establish and confirm that they didn't leave because of a misunderstanding but because they understood perfectly. refute the idea that the disciples who left had bad intentions from the get-go anyway.
franciscanheart Posted October 26, 2004 Posted October 26, 2004 great thanks aluigi. im really confused by this latest response but i will do my best with a little bit of time. beginning of the week is stressful plus two essays and a show to manage. ill get to you shortly i promise thanks for you help and for allowing me to participate in this its very helpful and i really enjoy it
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