shortysportychick Posted December 22, 2004 Posted December 22, 2004 i know!!!!!!!! lets start over!!! How
*teen4Christ* Posted December 22, 2004 Posted December 22, 2004 ok so we had " What I thought was a chicken under a hat that managed to squirt a large amont of pickle in a rounded glass filled with green ugly muck was the coolest little midget with a black shoe with purple and big pink pokadotted peice of candy cane that was jumping up and down while looking at the most unusual because elvis who likes to see people walking down the street in their really ugly dresses from lala land (.)" I lost!!!!! ok now the new one: How can Dogs...
homeschoolmom Posted December 22, 2004 Posted December 22, 2004 Oh, how I want to get out my red pencil and fix this up!!! " What I thought was a chicken under a hat[color=red],[/color] [s]that[/s] managed to squirt a large amo[color=red]u[/color]nt of pickle in a rounded glass [color=red]turned out to be something else. [/color][color=red]The glass, [/color]filled with green ugly muck was the coolest little midget[color=red].[/color] [color=red]The midget had [/color][s]with[/s] a black shoe with purple and big pink po[color=red]l[/color]ka[color=red]-[/color]dotted peice of candy cane [color=red]on it. [/color] [color=red]The black shoe was [/color][s]that[/s] jumping up and down while looking at the most unusual [s]because[/s] [color=red]E[/color][s]e[/s]lvis[color=red]. [/color][color=red]This Elvis[/color][s]who[/s] likes to see people walking down the street in their really ugly dresses from lala land (.)" Actually, I'd probably crumple it up and start over...
journeyman Posted December 24, 2004 Posted December 24, 2004 [quote name='homeschoolmom' date='Nov 19 2004, 09:08 AM'] [Sorry to interrupt the game, but as a teacher, this run on sentance is driving me crazy. I want to get out my red pencil and edit soooo badly.] [/quote] my very thoughts when I saw the topic . . . and I'm not a teacher!
BrightSunshine Posted December 24, 2004 Posted December 24, 2004 (edited) in Edited December 24, 2004 by BrightSunshine
journeyman Posted December 24, 2004 Posted December 24, 2004 How can Dogs swim without moving in the water . . . that
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