My Song

[AlterDominicus]

So I sat in bed and I started to have words hit me all over, and I came up with this song, for the honor and greater glory of God;

So I will strew, strew, strew those flowers and roses for
You, you, you, I will lay that rose at your feet I will
Bow, bow, bow I will kiss your Holy feet you are my
Lord, Lord, Lord and I love you

I strew flowers for you, share through them
My sorrows, joys, and desires
I daily talk to you and if I get angry
I'll go to confession, still I strew, strew, strew
That pure red rose, to create a pathway for you
To lead us on this wonderous journey.

I want to dry your tears, and strew your face
So you will know of my unpettalling love for you
I will defend you and strew away I will
I'm saddend by your scorned and scarred face
But yet rejoice to know that you here...

So I will strew, strew, strew those flowers and roses for
You, you, you, I will lay that rose at your feet I will
Bow, bow, bow I will kiss your Holy feet you are my
Lord, Lord, Lord and I love you

So I will strew, strew, strew those flowers and roses for
You, you, you, I will lay that rose at your feet I will
Bow, bow, bow I will kiss your Holy feet you are my
Lord, Lord, Lord and I love you

So I will strew, strew, strew those flowers and roses for
You, you, you, I will lay that rose at your feet I will
Bow, bow, bow I will kiss your Holy feet you are my
Lord, Lord, Lord and I love you

[magnificat]

Neat! Always difficult to tell how it's supposed to sound though....

Reminds me of St. Therese

[brandelynmarie]

St. Therese came to my mind too! Thank you for sharing....

[Noel's angel]

Very cool! I had a wee melody in my head for it and it sounded pretty darn good lol

[OLAM Dad]

I know that it is a song...but as a poem it reads much better when I skip the repeated words.

It's a great poem/song. :applause:

[AlterDominicus]

Thanks guys. I wrote another one on my avater and sent it to Sister Judith Miryam in summit for her feast, because she loves him, and is a expert on this guy. (SMC, dont give it away!)

[MC IMaGiNaZUN]

This is so Catholic.

This is also so girly.

I mean those both in a good way. Most of the songs i hear praising God are well, not Catholic enough.

As for the girly part... Well, there is NEVER NEVER a song about God and flowers etc.


Rock on, i really enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.

SHALOM

[brandelynmarie]

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[FutureSoror]

It made me tear up!!

Edited June 11, 2006 by FutureSoror

[ThyWillBeDone]

That is awesome. Thanks for sharing it with us

[AlterDominicus]

Thank you all for your wonderful replies, its an encouragement to the Christian Song Writing Fleet, lol.