Help! Proof-read The Phatmass04 Order Of Mass

[dUSt]

For me later...

[Fides_et_Ratio]

[quote name='dUSt' date='Aug 5 2004, 10:44 PM'] What is the approved U.S. translation of the gloria? [/quote]
Gloria in excelsis Deo et in terra pax hominibus bonae voluntatis.
[i]Glory to God in the highest, and peace to his people on earth.[/i]

Laudamus te, benedicimus te, adoramus te, glorificamus te, gratias agimus tibi propter magnam gloriam tuam, Domine Deus, Rex caelestis, Deus Pater omnipotens.
[i]Lord God, heavenly King, almighty God and Father, we worship you, we give you thanks, we praise you for your glory.[/i]

Domine Fili unigenite, Iesu Christe, Domine Deus, Agnus Dei, Filius Patris, qui tollis peccata mundi, miserere nobis; qui tollis peccata mundi, suscipe deprecationem nostram. Qui sedes ad dexteram Patris, miserere nobis.
[i]Lord Jesus Christ, only Son of the Father, Lord God, Lamb of God, you take away the sin of the world: have mercy on us; you are seated at the right hand of the Father: receive our prayer.[/i]

Quoniam tu solus Sanctus, tu solus Dominus, tu solus Altissimus, Iesu Christe, cum Sancto Spiritu: in gloria Dei Patris. Amen.
[i]For you alone are the Holy One, you alone are the Lord, you alone are the Most High, Jesus Christ, with the Holy spirit, in the glory of God the Father. Amen[/i].

[dUSt]

Okay, so the Latin is actually the same. It's just the [i]translation[/i] that needs to be changed. Okay--that's easy.

[qfnol31]

I like it, especially the chants.

[qfnol31]

[quote name='dUSt' date='Aug 5 2004, 10:59 PM'] Okay, so the Latin is actually the same. It's just the [i]translation[/i] that needs to be changed. Okay--that's easy. [/quote]
Yeah, we have a pretty poor translation.

[dUSt]

The original PDF in the first post has been updated. Here is the updated Word Doc.

[Thy Geekdom Come]

[quote name='qfnol31' date='Aug 6 2004, 12:00 AM'] Yeah, we have a pretty poor translation. [/quote]
That's true.

The next GIRM is going to have a change, though.