BonnieLass Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 here's a poem i wrote about what i was feeling after i broke up with someone sorta....it's hard to explain but i felt awful and confused.. thats probably yeah i won't date anymore. The Fight with the Night. The darkness of the night, Is something I will not Fight During the day I hold up a wall, Around my heart above all At night I'm at peace, But the dawn will make it cease I fear only the day, I cannot be gay The riot in my heart remains, It's not easy to fight the pains Pains which I feel inside, I will not let lead as a guide I wear a mask to hide it all, Even though I want to bawl I will not let my emotions take over, For I will be sober When the sun sinks behind the trees, My soul is at last free Oh the joys that I feel, No man has the power to steal No money can buy the thing that I love, Which God gave me from above The gift He gave me now at last, But why do I cling to the past Something in it made me sad, Now of which is driving me mad The one and only thing I live for , Which is the night nothing more For I hope that every day which goes by, The pains will at last die I don't know how much I can hold, Love it the cure, for I am told I shall love the darkness that alone,Even though it's chilling me to the bone No matter how it all may seem , It is all but a dream But a dream it can't be, It's a nightmare don't you see The morning will arise, The darkness dies The pains will return to me, For it is meant to be I shall always live this way, every night and every day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uruviel Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 That was really good, I love the wording and the structure is cool! I love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BonnieLass Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 (edited) thanks i was really weirded out that i wrote it because before that i couldn't wrote a poem if my life depended on it... Edited May 12, 2006 by BonnieLass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uruviel Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 LOL!! Yeah I usually write em when I'm really emotional. lol that sounds funny but its true. Or no I take that back, if I had a strong inspiration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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heavenseeker Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 [quote name='BonnieLass' post='979366' date='May 12 2006, 02:09 PM'] here's a poem i wrote about what i was feeling after i broke up with someone sorta....it's hard to explain but i felt awful and confused.. thats probably yeah i won't date anymore. The Fight with the Night. The darkness of the night, Is something I will not Fight During the day I hold up a wall, Around my heart above all At night I'm at peace, But the dawn will make it cease I fear only the day, I cannot be gay The riot in my heart remains, It's not easy to fight the pains Pains which I feel inside, I will not let lead as a guide I wear a mask to hide it all, Even though I want to bawl I will not let my emotions take over, For I will be sober When the sun sinks behind the trees, My soul is at last free Oh the joys that I feel, No man has the power to steal No money can buy the thing that I love, Which God gave me from above The gift He gave me now at last, But why do I cling to the past Something in it made me sad, Now of which is driving me mad The one and only thing I live for , Which is the night nothing more For I hope that every day which goes by, The pains will at last die I don't know how much I can hold, Love it the cure, for I am told I shall love the darkness that alone,Even though it's chilling me to the bone No matter how it all may seem , It is all but a dream But a dream it can't be, It's a nightmare don't you see The morning will arise, The darkness dies The pains will return to me, For it is meant to be I shall always live this way, every night and every day. [/quote] that was deep. i loved it, one of the best pomes i have readin a long time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BonnieLass Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 thanks i've never show it to anyone really i like it alot but.....its wierd i'm still fighting it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heavenseeker Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 i write pomes when im tired but cant sleep or when i have something on my mind that just wont go away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BonnieLass Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 i only wrote one other, i don't write that much but yeah i wrote that around two oclock in the morn i couldn't sleep for days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heavenseeker Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 i wrote one comparing my thoughts to a train. and then i wrote one called living blind. its about how all year i was trying to tell myself that i couldnt love a girl that i know just to find out that she has a bf the next day. so now im wishing that she sees me as more than just a friend and leavs him for me. i shouldnt wish stuff like that but i cant help it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BonnieLass Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 (edited) i had the same problem then you feel awful but you're in love at the same time UGH!!!!!!! I hate guys some much!!!!!!!!!!! why can't i just find someone who that is like perfect and likes me back and.......... i need to talk to some dang it! Edited May 12, 2006 by BonnieLass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heavenseeker Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 glad t oknow u hate me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BonnieLass Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 i don't hate you i hate other guys i like LOL i so wierd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heavenseeker Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 i knew what u ment but the way u typed it it looked like u hate all guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BonnieLass Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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