Pain

[Pontifite 7 of 10]

I crack myself up!

[heavenseeker]

[quote name='uruviel' post='1021639' date='Jul 11 2006, 09:53 AM']
and no I don't have ADD.
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you dont? i thought you did :

[uruviel]

[quote name='Pontifite 7 of 10' post='1022055' date='Jul 11 2006, 05:22 PM']
I crack myself up!
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good. at least one of us thinks your funny.

[quote name='heavenseeker' post='1022057' date='Jul 11 2006, 05:25 PM']
you dont? i thought you did :
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funny

lol

[ardillacid]

[quote name='Pontifite 7 of 10' post='1016853' date='Jul 3 2006, 06:50 PM']
Do you have ADD? Your like "that's so stupid. To say boys just can't deal. Like you know them, it all depends on the person. Girls and boys have different tende..." Then your like "I like your new icon it's pretty".
(P.S.-That wasn't a burn)
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[uruviel]

ok. made your point. that's funny.....

[heavenseeker]

what does this have to do with pain?

[uruviel]

when has a topic ever been the same 3 posts later?

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[pyranima]

[quote name='hayden' post='997357' date='Jun 5 2006, 09:54 AM']
you know that pain you get when you are stressed out beyond that of which you can handle?
well i have that right now

here are the reasons

1 School
2 Girls
3 Parents
4 Drugs/Beer
5 Stupid things i do
6 Stupid things people say
I thought that #4 would help keep my mind off these things i was right for about 4 hours

Then i have all bad grades because i am stupid and I am scared because what am i going to do for the rest of my life? work at BurgerKing?

Well i just want to say i am sorry to every one who i have caused pain and I want to End it all.
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Angel of Darkness in the night thou comest,
pail thy skin red thy lips and full thy bossom.
Come O'Lady O'Angel O'Demon,
how do i hate thee so.
deny me sweet love as i paw for thee.
Never doest thou grace me with thy sweet kiss,
thy kiss of tender poision lips.
Kiss O'Kiss O'Kiss me with death,
and hell be far not behind.


Its a poem i wrote called Lilith. i know all about pain man, the kind of pain that keeps you up at night. the kind that hurts so bad in side you writhe. ya man i know all about that kind of pain, the thing is to find your vocation, only there you will be happy even in torment there is joy when you follow your vocation.

[uruviel]

perfectly put pyranima. I love, I absolutely love that poem. Follow your vocation

[Pontifite 7 of 10]

My friend wrote this in her time of pain:

The door of oppourtunity has closed on my face

It went away and was lost without a trace



If sadness was a shadow, id be the pitch black ray of light

Disappearing with shame into the wintery night



If hopefulness was a window, made to jump out

I would carelessly crash through, without a doubt



If calmness was a volcano, meant to stay calm like a pond with no fish

I would erupt like a furious fool, with only a deathwish



But if a deathwish was a boat, big and wide

Id be on board flowing with the tide

Edited July 12, 2006 by Pontifite 7 of 10

[uruviel]

it's good, I like the last 2 lines. And the first 2 lines.

[quote]id be the pitch black ray of light[/quote]

I think in poetry you have to make the distinction between light and dark. You can't be a black ray of light, it doesn't make sense, that's like saying I'm a doubtful person who has hope. When I read poetry most of the time, or rather when I write poetry I use light as hope, and darkness as doubt. But allot of times I write with the intention as darkness is my destiny, my soul is darkness.

[Pontifite 7 of 10]

Well thats how she felt. Thats how she expressed her feelings at that time.

[uruviel]

ok. I just think you should make the distiction between the two.

[pyranima]

[quote name='uruviel' post='1022938' date='Jul 12 2006, 10:44 AM']
it's good, I like the last 2 lines. And the first 2 lines.
I think in poetry you have to make the distinction between light and dark. You can't be a black ray of light, it doesn't make sense, that's like saying I'm a doubtful person who has hope. When I read poetry most of the time, or rather when I write poetry I use light as hope, and darkness as doubt. But allot of times I write with the intention as darkness is my destiny, my soul is darkness.
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As a poet it depends on what you are trying to convey, for example if i am saying "I am the Light of Darkness" it seems like a contradictions. but its not at all "Oh swee darkness bring thee the light that i may see" in this context i am speaking of someone who is surrounded by light so that they are not able to see like looking into the sun. and thus in order to see one needs shade. in the sense of the light of i am the light of darkness the context is to be understood that in a world of light i am the darkness, there is so much light that it is the darkness that appears as a ray rather than the light. it depends on how you want to convey your message and what it is that you are trying to convey.