uruviel Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 ah very good point, that does make sense when you explain it that way. It does depend on what you are trying to convey, and, well basically what you are trying to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pyranima Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 I am a Gothic style Writer so i play alot with Shades with Light and Darkness. My poems can be hard to read for some because when you read it the first time you get one thing but if you sit and dwell on them you begin to see other angles to them, suddenly you discover that every morbid and dark line is actually one of Hope and Life and all the lines you thought pointed to life and Hope you discover are covered in morbid undertones. The Light becomes Dark and the Dark becomes light, its the story of my life and they say write what you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossCuT Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 (edited) [size=1][color="FF6699"]I love poetry! But most of the stuff I have written recently is all applying feelings and ideas to nature. I LOVE all poems that are not literal. Anything literal is BORING. I like imagination, and long flowery words. POetry is ART at its BEST. I love poetry You guys should sign up at this site www.allpoetry.com its great! I have an account there and its really nice! You can post your poems and people comment on them and give you advice etc. [/color][/size] Edited July 13, 2006 by CrossCuT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proud2BCatholic139 Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 I just write whatever comes to mind and it is my poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pontifite 7 of 10 Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 I can't rhyme at all. Wish I could. But I can't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uruviel Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 [quote name='pyranima' post='1023451' date='Jul 12 2006, 11:21 PM'] I am a Gothic style Writer so i play alot with Shades with Light and Darkness. My poems can be hard to read for some because when you read it the first time you get one thing but if you sit and dwell on them you begin to see other angles to them, suddenly you discover that every morbid and dark line is actually one of Hope and Life and all the lines you thought pointed to life and Hope you discover are covered in morbid undertones. The Light becomes Dark and the Dark becomes light, its the story of my life and they say write what you know. [/quote] thats so cool! lol, people say my writtings are dark, I wouldn't call them gothic. I think that's very good that you have your own style, and you write what you know, that's your mind, that's you, on paper. Of course the mind could never really be put on a piece of paper, but we try what we can. I would love to read some of your poetry some day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uruviel Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 [quote name='CrossCuT' post='1023470' date='Jul 12 2006, 11:32 PM'] [size=1][color="FF6699"]I love poetry! But most of the stuff I have written recently is all applying feelings and ideas to nature. I LOVE all poems that are not literal. Anything literal is BORING. I like imagination, and long flowery words. POetry is ART at its BEST. I love poetry You guys should sign up at this site www.allpoetry.com its great! I have an account there and its really nice! You can post your poems and people comment on them and give you advice etc. [/color][/size] [/quote] well, I do a very big variety. I do literal, and sometimes I compare things to nature allot too, then I write where no one knows what I'm talking about. [quote name='Proud2BCatholic139' post='1023473' date='Jul 12 2006, 11:37 PM'] I just write whatever comes to mind and it is my poetry. [/quote] that's the best kind [quote name='Pontifite 7 of 10' post='1023555' date='Jul 13 2006, 08:11 AM'] I can't rhyme at all. Wish I could. But I can't. [/quote] no one can't ryme, tell me what rymes with heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pyranima Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 Here is a poem i wrote a few years ago called "I", it was writen when i was all alone in the world. "I" I called and there was no answer I cried and there was no shoulder I hated and there was no love I sang and there was no praise I loved and there was no return I died and there was no morning signed simply lost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God the Father Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 [quote name='Pontifite 7 of 10' post='1023555' date='Jul 13 2006, 09:11 AM'] I can't rhyme at all. Wish I could. But I can't. [/quote] You know who can rhyme? Inspectah Deck. Those are some mad rhymes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pyranima Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 Poetry is not about Rhymes. "O Dark Night i beg thee Coverst thou bright eye that mine iniquity be not know. But allas no man be a creature of the night and day breaketh night and the light reveals all." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uruviel Posted July 15, 2006 Share Posted July 15, 2006 that is exactly right, when I first started writting poetry I was stretching way too far, going too far with trying to ryme that poetry was weak. I had weak phrases, and all I cared about was rythem and rhyming. The format of poetry is so much more than words that rhyme and fit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossCuT Posted July 15, 2006 Share Posted July 15, 2006 [size=1][color="FF6699"]I love poerty [/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uruviel Posted July 15, 2006 Share Posted July 15, 2006 mmhmm. me too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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